- "Behold! The realness of Tedd!"
- The offer to introduce Jay to Tedd
I felt Grace would be understanding of this for a whole bunch of reasons, but I ALSO felt that she would NOT be a happy squirrel cheerfully declaring "okie-dokie!"
No, we to get to see the rare wonder of nature that is anger management Grace. Yeah, she mostly gets it, but she's not happy about it.
Whose Dialogue is it Anyway?
I was about to write this commentary when I felt I had to stop and go back to make panel two less confusing. Bishop was originally the left of panel two, which I felt looked better. The problem was, it's a flashback of her talking, but she's not the one with dialogue. While it HAD to have been Jay actually talking, it wasn't instantly apparent.
Heck, *I* thought it looked like Bishop was the one saying stuff, and I'm the one who wrote it.
Something like that shouldn't be a puzzle (even if an easy one), so I moved her to the right, and connected the dialogue balloons so no detective work was required to figure out who the heck was talking.