- Zeus being helpful!

- Susan going over the messages

At one point, I was writing all this new stuff about immortals and hospitality, and why Hope's offer of hospitality should be taken seriously.

Then part of my brain spoke up and said "immortal vows are already a thing. Just do that."

And so we were saved from possibly an entire page of completely unnecessary exposition.

It gave me determination

I wanted to bring back Hope's home in this part of the story, and was thinking things like "how should Hope bring it up? What's a sensible reason for her to show it to them?"

BUT THEN I watched an anime that I thought was boring compared to the manga, because in the manga, THINGS HAPPENED IN FUN WAYS. This got me thinking about how I should go about things in stories.

So because I was disappointed in an anime, Hope got stage fright and ran through a wall.

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- Last Thursday EGSNP

- Saturday EGSNP